This week in writing I did creatvie writing.I use LPG 13 this week.This is my picture i write about.
This is my writing
The giraffe said to him himself I thought climbing up this tree was a good idea. until he herd a crack and said what was that. Carbuff he fall. He was screaming until he landed On a scale crocodile. The crocodile chased him in the water. The giraffe can't swim. Oh no he's going to die!!! yeah he got away. But the crocodile bit his leg off so he could not run. So he had to hop. The giraffe hoped into a herd of elephants but the giraffe died. The herd of elephants ran away. But the giraffe was only joking he did not die. Because he wanted the herd of elephants to run away.
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