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Thursday, 29 June 2017

This week in writing we did narrative writing. I use LPG 5. Here is what I write.



Mikayla and Bob went on a boat to get to the woods. They found a perfect place to camp. Bob wanted to be the boss and Mikayla got mad and stormed off. Mikayla her a sound. So she rushed back to Bob. Bob's saw  something. Mikayla and Bob were really scared. They saw a shark swimming in the forest. So they quietly walked  back. They did not want to get the Sharks attention. The shark saw them. Did they die or did they not ... How do we find out? Other people came to the woods and they found the bodies. So they did end up dying.

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