This week we did  persuasive writing. we could chose a lot of diffrint obshins.You also can agree or disagree.This is what i chose, Hurupaki school should change lunch from 12.00-1.00 to 12.30- 1.30.I disagree. Here is my writing.

I think that we should keep our normal lunchtime.  others might get hungry during the middle block and might not work properly.  

My second reason is the senior wont get as much time to do senior sports.  That would suck!  also we would have to have a longer assembily.  

My third reason is we would not have time to clean and everyone will be rushing.  the class will not be tidy.  Maybe the teachers will  make us stay in until we finish cleaning.  The bus people might be late .  That is my three reasons why we should keep our normal lunhtime.